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I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
I turn the knob
of the poetic 'door'
then, enter...
into such a wonderous place
it's filled with the most lyrical beauty
and paints the biggest smile 'pon my face...
it's vibrant,
and elusive
aloof, this 'world of wonder
aglow with poetry's exclusive
effusive,
elaborate
intricate
and on emotional
display,
I think I'm gonna make
this visit, an 'all day' foray...
a jaunt
into worlds only
a few can exist
singed by the melody
a 'mellow me' can
flip, and twist
diving down to depths
if I dare, resurfacing for
want of warmth and
a lil magic in the air...
it's that turn of the knob
to the poetic 'door'
I enter this place...
similar to that 'Wonderland'
so oft told
yet far more profound
with a variety of tastes
from mild, to hot, or bold
it's a door to the artists
that create poetry,
straight from the Soul!
of the poetic 'door'
then, enter...
into such a wonderous place
it's filled with the most lyrical beauty
and paints the biggest smile 'pon my face...
it's vibrant,
and elusive
aloof, this 'world of wonder
aglow with poetry's exclusive
effusive,
elaborate
intricate
and on emotional
display,
I think I'm gonna make
this visit, an 'all day' foray...
a jaunt
into worlds only
a few can exist
singed by the melody
a 'mellow me' can
flip, and twist
diving down to depths
if I dare, resurfacing for
want of warmth and
a lil magic in the air...
it's that turn of the knob
to the poetic 'door'
I enter this place...
similar to that 'Wonderland'
so oft told
yet far more profound
with a variety of tastes
from mild, to hot, or bold
it's a door to the artists
that create poetry,
straight from the Soul!
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Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
22nd Jan 2014 3:39pm
re: Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
22nd Jan 2014 3:52pm
Aaaaawwww well then cum drip with me! lol
Thank you my sweetness, truly grateful for your support always :)
Thank you my sweetness, truly grateful for your support always :)
Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
22nd Jan 2014 5:13pm
re: Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
22nd Jan 2014 8:50pm
No worries I'll catch you so you don't hurt yourself! lol
c'mon lets go find that goddamn rabbit! lol
Thank you my sweet lady, I appreciate your support
always :)
c'mon lets go find that goddamn rabbit! lol
Thank you my sweet lady, I appreciate your support
always :)
Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
22nd Jan 2014 8:19pm
Poetikmind - Sometimes we have to turn the knob and open that door to step out of the confining box we find ourselves in order to see new perspectives not seen before and draw on strengths not used before so we can write the words not written before. Puts a Bliss in my Poetryland everytime too. Nice work and much enjoyed Poetikmind. Namyh
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re: Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
22nd Jan 2014 8:55pm
Yes, if course you're right n I'm always open to that
and I always will be willing to explore any n all possibilities
of expressing the creativity within me. I thank you for your time n very thoughtful commentary! I am deeply grateful :)
and I always will be willing to explore any n all possibilities
of expressing the creativity within me. I thank you for your time n very thoughtful commentary! I am deeply grateful :)
Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
22nd Jan 2014 8:24pm
Poetry flows inside your veins, Poe! How could you not be in total bliss, surrounded by an art that you bleed?! ;)
You know I love this, right?! Xo
You know I love this, right?! Xo
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re: Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
22nd Jan 2014 8:57pm
Aaaaawww my precious Rain, it does in you too n love flows in yours n I feel it always! Thank you so very much, I'm humbled n grateful :)
Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
23rd Jan 2014 00:48am
I love how your words tumble down my screen, you are always so pleasurable to read.
Impressive as usual Poe x
Impressive as usual Poe x
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re: Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
23rd Jan 2014 2:24am
Aaawww gosh; how u melted me... :) truly, I thank you
so much for all your wonderful support! :)
so much for all your wonderful support! :)
Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
24th Jan 2014 11:35pm
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25th Jan 2014 4:28am
Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
25th Jan 2014 3:11pm
re: Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
25th Jan 2014 11:47pm
Thank you sweetness, you are wonderful too! Appreciate you sooooooooo much :)
Re: I'll Bliss, in PoetryLand...
26th Jan 2014 8:43pm
Let's meet in PoetryLand! You created a magic world that invites for strolls and overnight stays :-).
A passionate call for POETRY!
A passionate call for POETRY!
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