your bedroom

It's like that PS!Good on ya!Enjoyed this write.

Thanks Tommie

Glad you enjoyed.

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classic, sensual, erotic

first three words to come to my mind after reading this one a few times.

There is something I really like in your poems PS: I want to read them again, each time slowing down the pacing and small silences between the words.

Thank you J

That is high praise coming from a poet such as yourself.

Appreciate your feedback

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Beautiful!!

Thank you Nadia

It's nice to see you again.

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You too Speak, good to see you :)

..taking another person's breath away is a beautiful thing, especially when the bedroom becomes whatever room you christen with passion...
Nice...Xo

Nicely put.

Passion is the key.  It always wins.

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Feels like living through a moment in time. I enjoyed this.

Thanks so much for your feedback and for stopping by.

Really nice! A short poem yet so powerful. Keeps your imagination going even after reading

Thank you

Appreciate your feedback.

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I love the opening line and how it pulls me in until the finish... moving x

Thanks so much for your comments.

xo
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