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you know who you are
take a break with me
come lay with me
Dionysus invites us thus
to share in drink and misplace trust
ecstasy's tour bus
escape the fuss, this trip's a must
I'll make a space for you
not sure if you're coming but wake me up if you do x
come lay with me
Dionysus invites us thus
to share in drink and misplace trust
ecstasy's tour bus
escape the fuss, this trip's a must
I'll make a space for you
not sure if you're coming but wake me up if you do x
Published 15th Jan 2014
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17th Jan 2014 2:15am
The reference to Dionysus is great. Again, this shows such a refinement of style and deliberate choices you've made as a writer. 4 simple couplets tell an entire story. Absolutely spectacular work.
