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Ink on his thumb
he smeared his
love notes across
her ruby red lips
staining them dark
Deliciously sweet
upon her mouth
she dragged her
silky tongue over
his tasty words
Her eyes were pools
of lust were he
could dive his
trembling body and
be filled with pleasure
With him swimming
through her she
reads his body like
poetry with every
part of her soft body
His lines colorful in
certain places and
where they become
sad she brushes gentle
kisses tasting his battles
Her beautiful chest
rises and falls her
heart beats love while
he inflicts pleasure
upon her curves
Together they turn
the page slowly
with her mouth reading
his body and his mouth
reading hers
he smeared his
love notes across
her ruby red lips
staining them dark
Deliciously sweet
upon her mouth
she dragged her
silky tongue over
his tasty words
Her eyes were pools
of lust were he
could dive his
trembling body and
be filled with pleasure
With him swimming
through her she
reads his body like
poetry with every
part of her soft body
His lines colorful in
certain places and
where they become
sad she brushes gentle
kisses tasting his battles
Her beautiful chest
rises and falls her
heart beats love while
he inflicts pleasure
upon her curves
Together they turn
the page slowly
with her mouth reading
his body and his mouth
reading hers
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12th Jan 2014 5:54pm
Oh my goodness this great :-) You really have a twist for the senses...love this Tommie...
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13th Jan 2014 2:36am
well if thumb
is a metaphor for males long one
tis okay
all men will love
to be done
is a metaphor for males long one
tis okay
all men will love
to be done
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12th Jan 2014 9:15pm
Mmm thus is a pool of sensuality words flow swimming with eloquence beautiful write. I love how the lines play with the smearing of lips reading each other
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Anonymous
13th Jan 2014 3:18am
ohhh MY! Tommie this is freaking delicious!! So many wonderful lines its hard to pick favorites but...
"Her eyes were pools
of lust where he
could dive his
trembling body and
be filled with pleasure"
made me want to hit the high board..;)
"Her eyes were pools
of lust where he
could dive his
trembling body and
be filled with pleasure"
made me want to hit the high board..;)
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