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STRIPPED
Lost in her embrace
Clouded by her soft whispers
He parts from this world
And wishes secretly
To remain
Afloat
Clouded by her soft whispers
He parts from this world
And wishes secretly
To remain
Afloat
Published 11th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2014 00:25am
Beautiful sensation. Short but amazing. Enjoyed! :)
12th Jan 2014 2:40am
...disorientated and in unfamiliar surroundings is a beautiful thing, when you lose yourself to love's hold....Xo
Love it, Chris....
Love it, Chris....
12th Jan 2014 5:56am
An incredible--wondrous--experience...when truly in love,how our very spirit is released...how the soul transcends ALL the bonds of its earthly confinements.....
I am adrift in the sensual serenity of this piece!
I am adrift in the sensual serenity of this piece!
Anonymous
12th Jan 2014 8:42am
Sometimes you never want to come down... love this...
Anonymous
12th Jan 2014 11:12am
Feather light....
12th Jan 2014 6:45pm
