fuck my life

I had a poem similar to this. http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/14245/
and completely agree with the subject. Though, you don't know how hard people have had it. So it's not entirely correct to judge so harshly, but I'm assuming the majority of them are.

Everyone these days, including even me sometimes, the hypocrite, thinks "Woe is me, my life sucks."

But think about children in third world countries who slowly die from disease and starvation. Children of 8 years old who have to care for their 20 younger siblings because their parents died.

It's truly awful if you think about it. And you should be damn right thankful that you're not them. I guess we all slip sometimes, though.

see but i hate when people bring up that their are people in 3rd world countries dying. because that in no way relates to what im talking about. yeah i know theyre suffering but its not like its my fault. im just tired of people who complain or say that they have it so hard when its not all that hard for them. i almost didnt post this poem because people would say stuff like what you said.

It does relate. It teaches a person how to be humble.
Of course it's not your fault, but just because it's not your fault does that make you less sorry?

And it's hard for all of us at certain times. Writing a poem about it is better than going crazy and doing something irrational that endangers the safety of others, though.

I'm sorry if I ruined your poem with my comment and I'll gladly edit it out if you wish. I wasn't trying to offend anyone.

and just because my standard of living is substantially higher than some one in a country, for one doesnt mean i dont have the right to complain about things and for two doesnt mean i cannot have struggles of my own. it would be absurd to think that just because im not starving in africa doesnt mean i have to go through life like i never have problems

I never said any of that... I wasn't even referring to you in the first place. I was referring to the people who you were talking about in your poem.

We're all allowed to have struggles. And we're all allowed to write about them.

And, see. This is where you proved yourself wrong.. People are allowed to complain even if their "standard of living is substantially higher than someone in another country"

:]

oh sorry for the misunderstanding
but how did i prove myself wrong? all i meant was im not in deep deep poverty like them

:] I know.. it's okay. I think I'm a little bit confused here too.. Sorry for spamming your beautiful poem with these silly little comments.

dalton this is sad and i agree

ooohhh and i forgot to say amazing by the ways