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A Cancer On Society
Hate all boozing with a passion,
Just don't care if it’s in fashion,
No matter what the others think,
Don’t respect the choice to drink.
Booze is a drug that only leads,
To cruel and cowardly crimes and deeds,
A rotten lie, one big mistake,
A sham, a scam, so false and fake.
A cancer on societies,
Which causes all varieties,
Of deaths and pain to those who choose,
To never drink a drop of booze.
Just don't care if it’s in fashion,
No matter what the others think,
Don’t respect the choice to drink.
Booze is a drug that only leads,
To cruel and cowardly crimes and deeds,
A rotten lie, one big mistake,
A sham, a scam, so false and fake.
A cancer on societies,
Which causes all varieties,
Of deaths and pain to those who choose,
To never drink a drop of booze.
Published 4th Jan 2014
| Edited 17th May 2022
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23rd Jun 2014 9:33pm
Great poem. I wish there was a way to get this message out there, wide spread, in high schools and colleges. Only suggestion, it may be stronger if you can take the "I" out of the poem, and let the phases represent a new cultural trend, instead of your opinion...
25th Jun 2014 10:06am
Thanks jvp, excellent idea, it would be a lot better without the 'I's. Will keep spreading the message.
