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FROZEN
Their musher lost
On a frozen terrain
Five dogs crossed
Their reins on his pain
Nothing to taste
No feeling to hold
Nothing to waste
Before his soaring soul
And only his sight
Of sun on the snow
And the white blinding light
Of the last picture show.
A motionless figure
Speeding through space
The circles spiral bigger
In heavenly grace.
On a frozen terrain
Five dogs crossed
Their reins on his pain
Nothing to taste
No feeling to hold
Nothing to waste
Before his soaring soul
And only his sight
Of sun on the snow
And the white blinding light
Of the last picture show.
A motionless figure
Speeding through space
The circles spiral bigger
In heavenly grace.
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3rd Jan 2014 5:03pm
I love your simplicity - an amazing write, and it's wonderful to read the insight.
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3rd Jan 2014 6:09pm
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Concise, yet vividly serene beauty of the soul's release from the physical confines of its earthly
existence...
redemption...
(rebirth)
Inspirational Ink, my friend!
existence...
redemption...
(rebirth)
Inspirational Ink, my friend!
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2014 9:53pm
shiverrin' tymburs whale rM
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2014 3:24am
This is truly beautiful with easy flow and the imagery of the soul rising, freeing finding release is very well done!
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4th Jan 2014 10:23am
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2014 10:47am
The phoenix rising from its ashes...
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2014 11:16am
Humbly taking a bow!
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