deepundergroundpoetry.com
PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
He whispered mirrors
reflecting hidden desires
delicately woven words
igniting forest fires
souls aflame
we are blazin trees
in an intimate rush
of ruffled leaves
steamy potpourri
loves sweet heat brew
subtle whimpers
reverberate vibrant hue
i inhale his thoughts
he fills my every follicle
intense incense
divine essence in every particle
as i exhale sweet bliss
uninhibited aftershocks
exponentially
thinking outside pandoras box
multifaceted moans
harp our gritty love story
soulful sighs echo a love song
of purple passion and glory
cronicles the nirvana
see, he's my marijuana
and he lifts me
effortlessly
higher,perpetually
ascending beyond the trees
sacral pleasures abound
in quantum theories
we are on parallel planes
and we met in between the lines
all our angles are right
and we intersect when velocity is prime
a passionate phenomena
unravel the bindings on my soul
i untwine his carnal need
as he's sucked into my blackhole
the whole world disappears
and its just us two and the darkness
the only sound is soft moans
and breathless breaths
reflecting hidden desires
delicately woven words
igniting forest fires
souls aflame
we are blazin trees
in an intimate rush
of ruffled leaves
steamy potpourri
loves sweet heat brew
subtle whimpers
reverberate vibrant hue
i inhale his thoughts
he fills my every follicle
intense incense
divine essence in every particle
as i exhale sweet bliss
uninhibited aftershocks
exponentially
thinking outside pandoras box
multifaceted moans
harp our gritty love story
soulful sighs echo a love song
of purple passion and glory
cronicles the nirvana
see, he's my marijuana
and he lifts me
effortlessly
higher,perpetually
ascending beyond the trees
sacral pleasures abound
in quantum theories
we are on parallel planes
and we met in between the lines
all our angles are right
and we intersect when velocity is prime
a passionate phenomena
unravel the bindings on my soul
i untwine his carnal need
as he's sucked into my blackhole
the whole world disappears
and its just us two and the darkness
the only sound is soft moans
and breathless breaths
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 3
comments 15
reads 1359
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
2nd Jan 2014 7:28pm
Not wanting to use words no longer relevant but, this is off the damned chain!!! The extensive use of vivid metaphor used in this ink reminds me of "Strawberry Letter 23" from the days of old LOL
I don't know whether or not I wanna' get high or get laid after toking on this,
Beautiful execution....Love it.
I don't know whether or not I wanna' get high or get laid after toking on this,
Beautiful execution....Love it.
1
re: Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
2nd Jan 2014 8:37pm
lol so glad you enjoyed..appreciate your kind feedback.. my humbled thanks Mr.M
re: re: Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
2nd Jan 2014 8:44pm
btw.....the obvious, most outstanding stanza:
"....a passionate phenomena
unravel the bindings on my soul
i untwine his carnal need
as he's sucked into my black hole "
an anticipatory strain yet fits perfectly right here : )
"....a passionate phenomena
unravel the bindings on my soul
i untwine his carnal need
as he's sucked into my black hole "
an anticipatory strain yet fits perfectly right here : )
0
re: re: re: Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
2nd Jan 2014 8:56pm
very pleased you used the word anticipatory..i was striving to depict that moment.. that very last second before impact..and all control is lost..thanks again for reading - hugs
Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
2nd Jan 2014 9:32pm
OMFG!! First off that pic. is HOTT! But so too is this ink n damn... Talk about passion! My god woman you sure
express it here in bunches!! another Fav! :)
express it here in bunches!! another Fav! :)
0
re: Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
2nd Jan 2014 9:52pm
many thanks Poetik :) so happy you enjoyed and thanks for adding to your list..appreciate you - hugs
Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2014 2:12am
I read this ... and then I sat and thought, breathless ... and then I read it again... still the same reaction ... wonderful... waiting to breather,,,
0
re: Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
3rd Jan 2014 2:22am
oh wow! thanks for reading petit!! always value your awesome feedback -hugs
Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
4th Jan 2014 6:05am
The rhythm to this poem is absolutely phenomenal as well as the vivid mental picture. This is amazing!
0
re: Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
4th Jan 2014 6:13am
thank you kindly for reading ..so glad you enjoyed..much appreciation for your kind feedback!!!
Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
10th Jan 2014 00:12am
re: Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
11th Jan 2014 4:08am
Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
17th Jan 2014 12:52pm
re: Re: PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
17th Jan 2014 12:58pm
Re. PURPn *dic*ular TRYangles
24th Jul 2016 9:17am
Flickering spears of flame
He whispered mirrors
A Seer who eavesdrops without shame
reflecting hidden desires
Interjection fitting elegantly unfolding
delicately woven words
Roaming tight around curves, insight from the pyre
igniting forest fires
Chorus holds our brains
souls aflame
She rolls with my real name
we are blazin trees
Her face and feet I hold when hazed far past cheefed.
in an intimate rush
Skin touched by intuition's clutch, so no sin blush, we’re kin from the dust, the deep within? The stuff that's inimitable and too much? We spin the same lanes, whims, no stain within, shame is merely fear of the animal in each getting stim’ed, handling and reaching out with ease, shuffling beliefs and limits released, unmuffled breeze, tumble with me, tussle with glee and after we bust our freedom, before leaving I’ll preen your hair
of ruffled leaves
I can never get enough of what we share and breathe
steamy potpourri
Dreaming of you and me
loves sweet heat brew
Abuzz in a retreat with you
subtle whimpers
reverberate vibrant hue
Animal sounds express from my chest, you interpret each breath
i inhale his thoughts
When impaled hot, unfolding the trip when my obelisk unloads the global twist and you hold the gist, spilling all that I chronicled
he fills my every follicle
She gets my distilled swill and her quill thrills my every molecule
intense incense
No pretense in any sentence, part or whole.
divine essence in every particle
as i exhale sweet bliss
uninhibited aftershocks
Details are treats that don't miss, exhibition ad hoc, re-map what rocks
exponentially
thinking outside pandoras box
multifaceted moans
That we never asked for, plus secret magic tones
harp our gritty love story
Shifty sands, slip like mysteries in our hands, reveries roll by, molding the dawn
soulful sighs echo a love song
of purple passion and glory
Matching the core of me, romping in our mental sauna
cronicles the nirvana
Her sexy-bomb-blitz is the tonic of my prana
see, he's my marijuana
She sets free the sprees I only fawn over in awe
and he lifts me
She gifts me
effortlessly
higher,perpetually
I desire a blending, like palms bending a breeze
ascending beyond the trees
sacral pleasures abound
in quantum theories
In the immeasurable ground of wherever I find you near me
we are on parallel planes
and we met in between the lines
Sharing the spells we can't explain, subtext gleamed everytime
all our angles are right
Mutually empowered, understanding tight
and we intersect when velocity is prime
Simultaneously express impossibly fine oddities redefined
a passionate phenomena
Capturing higher rafters betwixt each pair of commas
unravel the bindings on my soul
Travel between the lines and roles
i untwine his carnal need
Aligned with how I feed
as he's sucked into my blackhole
the whole world disappears
Nerd roads from laughter, pearls from tears
and its just us two and the darkness
Coming through what sparked this
the only sound is soft moans
Never come down in this zone, heads undressed to gel together, eventual rest in the dimension of the unexpected crest
and breathless breaths
0