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30th Dec 2013 2:22pm
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1st Jan 2014 3:20pm
:) Perhaps ordinarily, humour and sex don't mix, otherwise it might not be erotic, but be a sex-comedy. But this poem of yours is erotic humour!
1st Jan 2014 9:27pm
I do not agree. I think humour and sex have similarities. The laugh is a kind of social orgasm.
Furthermore, you have the surprise effect, the unexpected... All this sensations may cause both laughter and desire..
Furthermore, you have the surprise effect, the unexpected... All this sensations may cause both laughter and desire..
2nd Jan 2014 2:06am
Oh yes, I think so too but it is rarely that I meet anyone or read anything that blends the pleasure of both humour and sex together. Your 2-line poems are quite funny, really, and thank goodness, they are noble as well!
