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Night moves
I was used to the light
Just in case
Keeping undesirable thoughts away
Now I prefer the dark
Snuggled within your embrace
My head against your chest
Hands carressing me to sleep
I might well move in the night
Changing my position, but your
Carress isn't too far away
As I keep one eye on you
There for each other.
Just in case
Keeping undesirable thoughts away
Now I prefer the dark
Snuggled within your embrace
My head against your chest
Hands carressing me to sleep
I might well move in the night
Changing my position, but your
Carress isn't too far away
As I keep one eye on you
There for each other.
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Re: Night moves
26th Dec 2013 8:53pm
This is beautiful Rose! It is indeed a secure and comfortable feeling conjured by such an embrace
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re: Re: Night moves
26th Dec 2013 9:11pm
The feeling of being safe in the night is everything
My dreams aren't always black and white
He's aware always as I am with him
Comforting embraces are most welcome always
My dreams aren't always black and white
He's aware always as I am with him
Comforting embraces are most welcome always
Re: Night moves
27th Dec 2013 2:07am
The night time embrace switches off many of the other senses. To leave the focus on where you are. I love that feeling. Thank you Ms Rose.
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Re: Night moves
Anonymous
27th Dec 2013 7:42am
Heartbeats and breath sync, warmth and touch and knowing you're not alone ... yes...
Love this - soothes just to read...
Love this - soothes just to read...
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re: Re: Night moves
27th Dec 2013 8:07am
Re: Night moves
Anonymous
27th Dec 2013 6:36pm
Rose I love how you worked around that title! PERFECT! and A lovely piece :)
don't tell me...title 1st or write then title? lol
don't tell me...title 1st or write then title? lol
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re: Re: Night moves
27th Dec 2013 7:45pm