Taste

I feel as though you handled yourself very well through this theme of love and need. You have a high level sophistication in your language and you deliver at the same level with you linguistic devices, ie; your metaphors. The theme you cover here is well explored and needs no further development without overdoing it. Which is  great compliment as many people either over do their description and lose the point or lack adequate depth for their subject matter. You have a very nice balance and a adept skill. Thank you (:

Thank u Apostrophe for tht comment

AD, I"m so glad you posted this poem, I loved it when you showed me yesterday and I love it even more now with the added image.
Its dripping with sensuality and desire, just beautiful!

Aww thank u so very much Vee tht means alot to me

Powerfully penned passion. Much adore it :)

Thank u so very much Blue Angle means alot

Tastefully beautiful! Enjoyed