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Just Watching


Subtle bodies ebbing to and fro
Moving, dancing close and slow
Tangled limbs in coarse delight
Their falling sin drips just right
Consuming, drifting scent to begin
A new player emerges and breaks in
Startled cries, confusion one side
Angry cage suppressing the others pride
She feigns left but dives to the right
Loud bang, screams, pain shoots up the night
Past talking reason, no going back
Memory of her moan, a panic attack
Four more pulls of the trigger then done
Now only a bullet left in the chamber for one
Written by SickSanityJenn (Esoteric)
Published | Edited 22nd Nov 2015
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