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the look in her eyes
the stare she gives me
the look of trickery
her eyes see my hollow soul
she corrupts my mind
once a man of peace
now a vicious
ruthless killer
blind by her charm
tricked by her eyes
a puppet on her strings
a slave to her spell
was i wrong
did i make a mistake
was it her
or did i let it happen
the look she gives me
was never love
it was greed
i was a nobody
and she was a lie
but what can i do
i was too late
she has me in chains
my will is gone
the look of trickery
her eyes see my hollow soul
she corrupts my mind
once a man of peace
now a vicious
ruthless killer
blind by her charm
tricked by her eyes
a puppet on her strings
a slave to her spell
was i wrong
did i make a mistake
was it her
or did i let it happen
the look she gives me
was never love
it was greed
i was a nobody
and she was a lie
but what can i do
i was too late
she has me in chains
my will is gone
Published 15th Dec 2013
| Edited 18th Feb 2015
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2013 3:02pm
Very well written, simply, but detailed all in one. I can relate to how it is written and understand the feeling of being hopelessly consumed by someone to the point you will do anything for them. Past experiences pop up in my head from this poem.
I'm looking forward to more of your writes.
I'm looking forward to more of your writes.
15th Dec 2013 4:35pm
16th Dec 2013 2:31am
Simple yes... but it packs a certain darkness a certain evil that lays hidden beneath the cracks. It also brought up memories for me filled with hopelessness knowing i gave my soul and my all to one... only to be buried alive in his hate. Excellent....
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