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Triolet 3-5-3 (2013-12-13)
Quiet in night
Sure, Gabi loves me
I love her
I know that
She gives all her love
Just for me
As you see
All my poetry
Is for her
Published 13th Dec 2013
| Edited 22nd Dec 2013
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2013 3:59pm
I must say this is very true and to the point, but I feel you can do so much more. There is more inside you could portray but do not. Feelings, smells, what you see. I would love to read what you have to say when you do let more out and spill on the paper.
13th Dec 2013 4:04pm
Oh thank you for your comment, Cassendra, you seem to help me for expressing all my feeling! Wide work, not wise, but very interesting. Surely, your comment is helpful to dare in this way!
