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13th Dec 2013 12:11pm
I would hate to be in that situation.
Beautifully Written Lobo.
Master of Haiku.
Darker
Beautifully Written Lobo.
Master of Haiku.
Darker
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14th Dec 2013 10:14am
Hating the situation is right ... I debated putting this in the Love category but figured it could be read many ways
... Thanks for the read
LSP
... Thanks for the read
LSP
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2013 3:07pm
LSP,
You have taken the conflict of Good and Bad to another level! Enjoyed!
tornado
You have taken the conflict of Good and Bad to another level! Enjoyed!
tornado

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re: Re: ...
14th Dec 2013 10:18am
Suspended tension between two states is definitely what I was aiming for ... Thanks for the insightful comment
LSP
LSP
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13th Dec 2013 6:03pm
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14th Dec 2013 10:20am
Thank you the poetic love Lady Rain ... cold hope - warm despair ... Love love love that analogy
LSP
LSP
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 3:05am
damn I hate those frozen arroyo's
meaningful ink LSP
meaningful ink LSP

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I hate them too ... so much trapped inside
Thanks for the read my man
LSP
Thanks for the read my man
LSP
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28th Dec 2013 2:47pm
I've never seen an arroyo, but you've painted a picture of something eerily tranquil.
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28th Dec 2013 11:40pm
arroyo translates to river in Spanish ... using it just worked for me on different levels ...
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/135519-/
If I remember correctly you do a bit of surfing? ... Where's the best place you've ever caught a wave?
LSP
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/135519-/
If I remember correctly you do a bit of surfing? ... Where's the best place you've ever caught a wave?
LSP