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darkest night
stars scattered in the sky
like a billion abandoned children gone awry
cold wet atmosphere
why am i here??
my hands are numb and icy
nothing in sight, or atleast not that i see
left for dead with nothing but my thoughts
like a billion abandoned children gone awry
cold wet atmosphere
why am i here??
my hands are numb and icy
nothing in sight, or atleast not that i see
left for dead with nothing but my thoughts
Published 3rd Feb 2011
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3rd Feb 2011 7:37am
this is amazing.. it's so heartfelt and i can relate very well !
the last line is very saddening as i feel very similar myself right now. stay strong and keep writing you have a talent ! use it my dear ! use it !
the last line is very saddening as i feel very similar myself right now. stay strong and keep writing you have a talent ! use it my dear ! use it !
3rd Feb 2011 4:42pm
