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might as well be dead
long distance relationships are a bit shit
you hate her but you're afraid that if you tell her
she'll end up on the end of your best friend's dick
It's crazy but she's your lady and then one day
she's just gone
It's what you were afraid of all along
but now the time has come
You can't move on so you just hold on but it takes so long
for the pain to go away
it never fades it just turns to hate
and it leaves you in such a state
This woman you had up on a pedestal,
every thought you have of her is dreadful
She's not done anything to deserve this kind of treatment
but it's all you can do to end the grieving
you hate her but you're afraid that if you tell her
she'll end up on the end of your best friend's dick
It's crazy but she's your lady and then one day
she's just gone
It's what you were afraid of all along
but now the time has come
You can't move on so you just hold on but it takes so long
for the pain to go away
it never fades it just turns to hate
and it leaves you in such a state
This woman you had up on a pedestal,
every thought you have of her is dreadful
She's not done anything to deserve this kind of treatment
but it's all you can do to end the grieving
Published 7th Dec 2013
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19th Jan 2014 00:06am
The power you pack into each and every word that you write is truly remarkable. You write as if every word you lay on the page carries its own weight, its own significance. I love this. Absolutely brilliant.
