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dear in-laws
I can't afford to fix my ride
or put any gas inside
but it fills me with a sense of pride
that your daughter still climbs inside
and then we ride
all night
until we see that sunlight
our love feels so right
thank you for raising a her
not perfect but unique
I've started to learn that's what we need
or put any gas inside
but it fills me with a sense of pride
that your daughter still climbs inside
and then we ride
all night
until we see that sunlight
our love feels so right
thank you for raising a her
not perfect but unique
I've started to learn that's what we need
Published 6th Dec 2013
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6th Dec 2013 6:55pm
Great poem!!! Congrats on ur amazing girl!!! Work as hard to keep her happy as u did to win her heart ;)
6th Dec 2013 8:25pm
Hey thank you! It didn't work in the end but I was reminiscing when I wrote this one.
14th Dec 2013 9:16pm
