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Letting Go
The world lies willy nilly
At our fingertips
The tip top of our
Conscienceness
The place where all
the keys are hid
Will teach you how
To pop your lid
Unleash what's left
And then you'll find
The smartest people
Have lost their mind
At our fingertips
The tip top of our
Conscienceness
The place where all
the keys are hid
Will teach you how
To pop your lid
Unleash what's left
And then you'll find
The smartest people
Have lost their mind
Published 1st Feb 2011
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1st Feb 2011 9:48am
1st Feb 2011 4:39pm
I like it very much. I'm bad at not slating poetry, and there's little to slate. Typo on line 2 though!
1st Feb 2011 5:47pm
