deepundergroundpoetry.com
Lover
My lover, come home to me
Ignite me
Consume me with your passion
Press your tasty lips to mine
I'm hungry for the taste of you
Let me look into your loving eye, I want this, need it
Come home to me
The length of your body
Caressing lightly, playfully
It's pressing, urgently
Fingertips
Reach into my secret place
Feel my deep
Feel my warm
Feel the heat between us, the love
I relive this moment
My lover, love me--as only you can
A look, a seductive whisper
a kiss on my hip
Gentle nips on my thighs
I open for you
Energetic and light from head to toe
My love for you increases with each moment like this
My lover, come home to me
Ignite me
I have waited for this, needed it
Grasping you, pleading
love dripping onto eachother
Melted together
heart to heart
face to face
Hold me closer, even closer still
Your heart kicking against your chest
so fast, I think it will explode
Let's show each other how love can be.
Lover,
My lover.
You're home
Come inside
Come
together.
Ignite me
Consume me with your passion
Press your tasty lips to mine
I'm hungry for the taste of you
Let me look into your loving eye, I want this, need it
Come home to me
The length of your body
Caressing lightly, playfully
It's pressing, urgently
Fingertips
Reach into my secret place
Feel my deep
Feel my warm
Feel the heat between us, the love
I relive this moment
My lover, love me--as only you can
A look, a seductive whisper
a kiss on my hip
Gentle nips on my thighs
I open for you
Energetic and light from head to toe
My love for you increases with each moment like this
My lover, come home to me
Ignite me
I have waited for this, needed it
Grasping you, pleading
love dripping onto eachother
Melted together
heart to heart
face to face
Hold me closer, even closer still
Your heart kicking against your chest
so fast, I think it will explode
Let's show each other how love can be.
Lover,
My lover.
You're home
Come inside
Come
together.
Published 31st Jan 2011
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1
reading list entries 1
comments 3
reads 1700
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
31st Jan 2011 1:44pm
Technically this is good, it works. The emotion falls short in some parts and this part made me laugh which unless you are writing a comedic-erotica I shouldn't laugh. 'Let me look into your loving eye, I want this, need it' - What's the other eye, evil eye! :D Just a heads up, maybe that's how my head works. The beginning works but I think as it unravels it gets more desperate and less "erotic", though with the fact you can spell everything well I will definitely have a look at your next write and see where we go. Well done.
1st Feb 2011 00:13am
3rd Feb 2011 3:38am
Reading that comment made me chuckle because I wrote this poem as a little romantic surprise for my boyfriend. I had never written about sex before so it was pretty hard for me to figure out what to do haha. I need some practice. Also, the man I wrote the poem for has only one eye :)
