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She Does Have Legs
Consisting of nylon or the finest silk weave
looking so sexy I forget to breathe
introducing a path to glory premeditated by the tease
a natural human desire as needed as a breeze
is my lust that obvious do you read my mind
further my imagination with those perfect stocking lines
the seamed stockings give a guy a guide when his rod is fully charged
hard to stop like your favorite sports car set free from the garage
and dang those legs encased in fishnets so embodying a naughty lass
hope interest is more then melting ice cream so destined to the past...
looking so sexy I forget to breathe
introducing a path to glory premeditated by the tease
a natural human desire as needed as a breeze
is my lust that obvious do you read my mind
further my imagination with those perfect stocking lines
the seamed stockings give a guy a guide when his rod is fully charged
hard to stop like your favorite sports car set free from the garage
and dang those legs encased in fishnets so embodying a naughty lass
hope interest is more then melting ice cream so destined to the past...
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Re: She Does Have Legs
27th Nov 2013 6:54pm
Classy n sassy! Love this smooth spill bro. N yea I got ya, no need to spell out what you mean, it was quite apparent lol
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re: Re: She Does Have Legs
27th Nov 2013 7:05pm
The queen of class, rain gave me the pre-publishing "stamp of approval". I was just happy to be able to write something that was short!
Thanks for the read!
Thanks for the read!
Re: She Does Have Legs
27th Nov 2013 7:47pm
it is short compared to ur previous writes , but in terms of quality it gives out what u r known for , that's excellence.. usually if I find a line or two that really clicks me I point it out .but this one has got so many, probably all ..u got me really hooked ..
write on..
cyanide..
write on..
cyanide..
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Re: She Does Have Legs
27th Nov 2013 8:07pm
Jazz, I haven't decided as of yet if this is more Morris Day and the Time or ZZ Top......but I like it. Done with your usual intellectual flair.
And.....
......if it meets Rain's approval, then, LOL.....it's a wrap. ('cause she's got legs; she knows how to use them) ; )
In my best Billy Gibbons voice, "They got a lot of nice girlz....heh, heh, heh, heh" (from LaGrange)
And.....
......if it meets Rain's approval, then, LOL.....it's a wrap. ('cause she's got legs; she knows how to use them) ; )
In my best Billy Gibbons voice, "They got a lot of nice girlz....heh, heh, heh, heh" (from LaGrange)
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re: Re: She Does Have Legs
27th Nov 2013 11:26pm
I don't mind being associated with either musical act :)
My more recent history suggests it is easier to get a pre-published comment then to find a partner to collaborate with!
My more recent history suggests it is easier to get a pre-published comment then to find a partner to collaborate with!
Re: She Does Have Legs
Anonymous
27th Nov 2013 10:13pm
I know I haven't caught up on commenting ion all your stunning work. Please believe me that I have read them all while I was gone. You're a great talent.....never let your ink clog. Luv them all! :)
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re: Re: She Does Have Legs
27th Nov 2013 11:27pm
oh I have had a few clogs! Really everytime I write an erotic poem I am convinced it will be my last---for fear that the next will be redundant.
Re: She Does Have Legs
28th Nov 2013 00:17am
Legs;.......they seem to be a lovely-weakness for most men.
Truly enjoyed reading this, Jazz! Very sexy.....Xo
Truly enjoyed reading this, Jazz! Very sexy.....Xo
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re: Re: She Does Have Legs
28th Nov 2013 1:52am
Re: She Does Have Legs
Anonymous
28th Nov 2013 2:11am
Hi, hon. So sorry I didn't get a chance to get back to you in time - but the work really does stand on it's own...
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re: Re: She Does Have Legs
28th Nov 2013 7:17am
laugh, if you were in the US you could blame it on preparations for turkey day!
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2013 9:09am
Just work and other ...stuff...
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Re: She Does Have Legs
29th Nov 2013 4:13pm
you did it again bro! the subtleness of your words, clearly say the genius in you...
/EngrVV
/EngrVV
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re: Re: She Does Have Legs
29th Nov 2013 5:34pm
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30th Nov 2013 11:19am
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Re: She Does Have Legs
2nd Dec 2013 2:26am
JZM, well done, well done indeed. A woman with beautiful legs will definitely grab any mans attention. You displayed it beautifully.
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re: Re: She Does Have Legs
2nd Dec 2013 5:46am
Thanks. Maybe eyes can be just as captivating but you can't see them from quite as far.