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the Winemaker
the vines have prevailed dry blistering frosts
and ripened fruit, fraught with sleepless nights
of looming rain, threatening fungal bloom
pulped forbidden fruit from caressing groves
plucked tender harvest of my pressing soul
encapsulated sensations fulfil my glass heart
this offering, my essence bottled in lead crystal
spells unbound with the romantic rite of cork
unleashing the flow from my jugular jinni
in velvet plume I bleed and I am blissfully absolved
outpouring into the sacred chalice with gentle kiss
of fragile mouths gulping air in pulsating chant
hands held precious flow swirled for an eternity
arousing scent of passion with every breath
and taste… the blood of life from lush tannin lips
This poem was written for the "Intergalactic Nuclearball (Fusion rules)" comp.
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Re: the Winemaker
25th Nov 2013 10:01pm
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This fucker took a bottle of red wine last night to unleash at some godforsaken hour... it's kinda a love poem to the bottle.
I'm stoked you're feeling the love, JR [homo free love... or free homo love... it's just fucking love]
Thanks for the reading list!!!
I'm stoked you're feeling the love, JR [homo free love... or free homo love... it's just fucking love]
Thanks for the reading list!!!
Re: the Winemaker
25th Nov 2013 10:32pm
This is the poem for oenophiles... and lovers, sharing a tasty merlot.
Now I'm thinking I need to visit a vineria. Great skill, there, Case, weaving the sensual with the wine!
Now I'm thinking I need to visit a vineria. Great skill, there, Case, weaving the sensual with the wine!
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re: Re: the Winemaker
26th Nov 2013 5:10pm
Re: the Winemaker
26th Nov 2013 00:28am
Ah, I've got some competition, very nice Case. Wish you the best of luck in that competition.
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re: Re: the Winemaker
Cheers, Tacete.
I hope I don't have to face off with a fellow Antarctan in the comp.
All the best mate.
I hope I don't have to face off with a fellow Antarctan in the comp.
All the best mate.
Re: the Winemaker
26th Nov 2013 1:32am
I've always been more of a beer drinker than a wine drinker, but your poem is making me very thirsty. This one leaves a velvety aftertaste. "Blood of life", yes! I find it difficult to merely sip, so I'm always lookin' forward to another swig! Such a lush!
Well done, man.
Well done, man.
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re: Re: the Winemaker
26th Nov 2013 5:17pm
I'm glad I could tempt a beer drinker into tasting the lushes blood of life.
Thank you kind Sir for dropping in.
Thank you kind Sir for dropping in.
Re: the Winemaker
Anonymous
26th Nov 2013 2:11am
Incredible. This...

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re: Re: the Winemaker
26th Nov 2013 5:23pm
Re: the Winemaker
Anonymous
26th Nov 2013 4:44am
This is one beautiful masterpiece!!
An ode to all finer things in life, one sip at a time flowing over the abstract painting of each stanza.
You did good Case...!!
An ode to all finer things in life, one sip at a time flowing over the abstract painting of each stanza.
You did good Case...!!

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re: Re: the Winemaker
26th Nov 2013 5:28pm
Far out, Vee, your comments are very generous. I'm really stoked you enjoyed this piece so much.
Thank you so much for adding this poem to your reading list. [bow]
Thank you so much for adding this poem to your reading list. [bow]
Re: the Winemaker
30th Nov 2013 12:25pm
After a hectic couple of weeks I'm just now catching up on my DUP reading ...
I read Petit Minou's ink for this comp and was blown away ... Now I'm reading yours and somehow you've pulverized what little of me was left ...
this was great Brotha!
LSP
I read Petit Minou's ink for this comp and was blown away ... Now I'm reading yours and somehow you've pulverized what little of me was left ...
this was great Brotha!
LSP
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re: Re: the Winemaker
2nd Dec 2013 5:39pm
Thank you, brother LSP. I'm blown away by your comments and that this piece made it to your reading list. Thank you.
Re: the Winemaker
4th Dec 2013 5:51am
I like this poem, because I find the atmosphere of the grape harvests, the quasi-fusion between people and the vineyard there to produce the best wine. A true masterwork!
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re: Re: the Winemaker
4th Dec 2013 8:35pm
Thank you, malin for your awesome comments. Yes, this poem is written for the love and ritual of wine.
Re: the Winemaker
7th Dec 2013 8:18pm
Woven and blended smoothly with so much finesse. Your skill seems to have no bounds, nor your adaption to any varied subject. Congratulations and good luck in the comp.
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re: Re: the Winemaker
2nd Jan 2014 4:18am
Jake, thank you so much for your awesome comment and for adding my poem to your reading list.
Re: the Winemaker
30th Dec 2013 12:01pm
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2nd Jan 2014 4:20am
Dennis, cheers mate. I'm stoked you like this so much that it made it to your reading list.