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cattle call
misery does'nt want company
just an audience
me,you and i
were in this together
i can be fly without feathers
all ties severed
only one of us can wear the veil
we all can fail
take the wind from your sails
be your best friend
steal your girl and bail
but nobody gonna bond me out
i'll be the clown
peekin out
the curtain smiling with a painted frown
just an audience
me,you and i
were in this together
i can be fly without feathers
all ties severed
only one of us can wear the veil
we all can fail
take the wind from your sails
be your best friend
steal your girl and bail
but nobody gonna bond me out
i'll be the clown
peekin out
the curtain smiling with a painted frown
Published 25th Nov 2013
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25th Nov 2013 5:30pm
the first two lines are so true..
my fav lines -
' take the wind from your sails
be your best friend
steal your girl and bail'
i can sense a struggle in this one ..
keep writing.
cyanide..
my fav lines -
' take the wind from your sails
be your best friend
steal your girl and bail'
i can sense a struggle in this one ..
keep writing.
cyanide..
25th Nov 2013 5:52pm
Oh my this is quite a write I may say. I just love the beginning because that is very much true. It does seem misery is just watching us while we are in the audience and misery is on the stage. Or is that misery is in the audience and we are the play. This was such a great write thank you.
Raven:)
Raven:)
Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 5:54pm
meeeeeeeew meeeeeeeeeeeew moooooo mooooooooo
moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Rm
moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Rm
26th Nov 2013 6:22am
Good flow and rhythm, jr. Dark and resigned...
First line typo "doesn't", fourth line "we're".
:)
First line typo "doesn't", fourth line "we're".
:)
30th Dec 2013 00:36am
misery does'nt want company
just an audience
me,you and i
were in this together
i can be fly without feathers
all ties severed
Yeeeeah, don't concur with your misery, just validate it.
just an audience
me,you and i
were in this together
i can be fly without feathers
all ties severed
Yeeeeah, don't concur with your misery, just validate it.
