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Re: Appetence - Senryu
Anonymous
24th Nov 2013 10:01pm
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24th Nov 2013 10:07pm
Re: Appetence - Senryu
Anonymous
24th Nov 2013 10:30pm
Lovely Iris..absolutely sighs with stregth of desire. Perfect! :)
~Tom
~Tom

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re: Re: Appetence - Senryu
So you're with me! Perfect!
Thanks Tom dear friend, for
your lovely comment!
Apropos lovely: That kitten of
yours is so cute!!!
Thanks Tom dear friend, for
your lovely comment!
Apropos lovely: That kitten of
yours is so cute!!!
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 5:30am
haha, he thinks so too, His name is Nicky and he's a rescue..he's really a love :) Thanks Iris xo

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Re: Appetence - Senryu
Anonymous
24th Nov 2013 10:33pm
Very sensual...

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24th Nov 2013 10:34pm
Re: Appetence - Senryu
24th Nov 2013 11:02pm
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24th Nov 2013 11:12pm
Oh, thank you so much, sensorydecay!
I'm humbled by your kind response!
I tend to "polish" my poems a lot
since English isn't my mothertongue and I'm
always afraid to disgrace myself :-).
I'm humbled by your kind response!
I tend to "polish" my poems a lot
since English isn't my mothertongue and I'm
always afraid to disgrace myself :-).
re: Re: Appetence - Senryu
24th Nov 2013 11:14pm
Re: Appetence - Senryu
24th Nov 2013 11:14pm
You're so good with these my dear, but when you add heat them? You're REALLY good! lol
Love it :)
Love it :)
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Re: Appetence - Senryu
25th Nov 2013 00:19am
desirous, the poet
wants...
and yet this poem
wants for
nothing...
it is complete
ly
lovely..:)
wants...
and yet this poem
wants for
nothing...
it is complete
ly
lovely..:)
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re: Re: Appetence - Senryu
25th Nov 2013 7:37am
Paul, those beautiful lines
formed by a poet whose
poetical competence wants for nothing
mean a lot to me!
Thank you!
formed by a poet whose
poetical competence wants for nothing
mean a lot to me!
Thank you!
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25th Nov 2013 3:26am
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25th Nov 2013 7:38am
Re: Appetence - Senryu
Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 6:11am
Beautiful and sensual.
You never cease to amaze me with the way you deliver with perfection. Very well done Ms. Chi :)
You never cease to amaze me with the way you deliver with perfection. Very well done Ms. Chi :)

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re: Re: Appetence - Senryu
25th Nov 2013 7:41am
I appreciate your lovely
words, Vee! They mean so much to me
since I adore your
immensely sophisticated and
enjoyable poems
so very much!
words, Vee! They mean so much to me
since I adore your
immensely sophisticated and
enjoyable poems
so very much!
Re: Appetence - Senryu
25th Nov 2013 12:02pm
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25th Nov 2013 12:13pm
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re: Re: Appetence - Senryu
26th Nov 2013 7:22am
That's a very sensual one, too, J.!
Thanks for complementing the poem :-)!
You inspired me ...
Thanks for complementing the poem :-)!
You inspired me ...
Re: Appetence - Senryu
26th Nov 2013 7:50pm
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26th Nov 2013 9:16pm
Re: Appetence - Senryu
26th Nov 2013 10:03pm
a beautiful word to discover, from the French through Latin. tread w/o fear into poetry, Chi, you know exactly what you're doing...
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re: Re: Appetence - Senryu
26th Nov 2013 10:39pm
I feel deeply honored by your
very lovely words and take them
as encouragment :-). Thanks, your kindness
means a lot to me!
very lovely words and take them
as encouragment :-). Thanks, your kindness
means a lot to me!
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1st Dec 2013 4:54am
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