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Sanctuary of reciprocity
Breath melting away her loneliness
Embracing her softly parted lips once more
As his eyes unlock her soul
Allowing him to explore
Her bountiful elixir
Discovering himself
Channelling a new path of pleasure
Heightening motivation
Slipping in and out of wonderment
Detaching from reality
For moments of euphoria
Releasing their essences
Their inner entities
Creating a sanctuary of reciprocity
Embracing her softly parted lips once more
As his eyes unlock her soul
Allowing him to explore
Her bountiful elixir
Discovering himself
Channelling a new path of pleasure
Heightening motivation
Slipping in and out of wonderment
Detaching from reality
For moments of euphoria
Releasing their essences
Their inner entities
Creating a sanctuary of reciprocity
Published 23rd Nov 2013
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Anonymous
27th Nov 2013 00:00am
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27th Nov 2013 6:05am
Glad you were feeling this piece Gabriel.
"Slipping in and out of wonderment" can be interpreted in different ways :)
S:)
"Slipping in and out of wonderment" can be interpreted in different ways :)
S:)
27th Nov 2013 6:26pm
As his eyes unlock her soul, wow that was a powerful punch of poetry. Love that line! I'm amazed at you're poetic talent. God bless my friend.
27th Nov 2013 11:18pm
7th Jan 2017 1:52pm
Such wonderful poetry. Excellently expressed and so eloquently put. Your talent is phenomenal. such a joy to read .Well done. moog.
3rd Feb 2017 4:43am
Anonymous
20th Oct 2017 10:02am
'Slipping in and out of wonderment '
ohhh....damn...what a vivid thing right there
like a 3-D effect i felt this
ohhh....damn...what a vivid thing right there
like a 3-D effect i felt this
