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Why...
There are not enough words to express how i feel.
I'm sorry i can't describe what is running through my mind.
It seems like a dream.
I wish it was.
You called...and said she was dead
Those words my ears could not comprehend.
It really is the end.
Her soul it really did descend.
I am so broken
I can't pretend
These tears I can't control
They just seem to spill...
I'm sorry i can't describe what is running through my mind.
It seems like a dream.
I wish it was.
You called...and said she was dead
Those words my ears could not comprehend.
It really is the end.
Her soul it really did descend.
I am so broken
I can't pretend
These tears I can't control
They just seem to spill...
Published 23rd Nov 2013
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Anonymous
23rd Nov 2013 9:01pm
Very powerful, tears are quite uncontrollable. I liked this and better use of ellipsis! Well done.
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26th Nov 2013 11:02pm
those phone calls can be quite devestating for sure Sara, and I truly hope the persons soul ascended not descended cause that is never good, Great heartfelt write my friend.
Cheers!
Cheers!
27th Nov 2013 2:14am
