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If i were you
And you were i
Id talk to me
Do u know why?
Cuz if you were me
And i were you
Id feel a strong connection too
But you are you
And i am me
And in your eyes,
Myself i see
And so i know this to be true
That you and i are one
Not two
And you were i
Id talk to me
Do u know why?
Cuz if you were me
And i were you
Id feel a strong connection too
But you are you
And i am me
And in your eyes,
Myself i see
And so i know this to be true
That you and i are one
Not two
Published 29th Jan 2011
| Edited 29th Nov 2012
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2011 7:38am
the ending made me all like "WOW" this is so clever!
31st Jan 2011 2:58am
31st Jan 2011 3:04am
I meant to comment on this earlier, and I'm honestly sorry I didn't, it's very clever. I like the use of 'me', 'I', 'we'...you're certainly not wasteful with terms. It works well enough, the structure's okay and I like the ending so all in all it's good :)
29th Nov 2012 1:45am
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