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she leaves him in the dark...

I am
the shad

ow you
cast as

you passed
by...bye...

Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 22nd Nov 2013

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Re: she leaves him in the dark...

Anonymous

22nd Nov 2013 11:17pm

brilliant!..so sightful .. or visible?

- Edited 22nd Nov 2013 11:39pm

22nd Nov 2013 11:38pm

thanks very much,
it's much appreciated...

honestly, thanks..:)

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Re: she leaves him in the dark...

23rd Nov 2013 2:53pm

the great
by & bye
if
ever
there was

bravO

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Re: she leaves him in the dark...

24th Nov 2013 5:43pm

Excellent in its shortness
and meaning. Always amazed
about your words' essence of
so complex matters.

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Re: she leaves him in the dark...

24th Nov 2013 9:36pm

Love your feeling my friend...peace to you :)

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Re: she leaves him in the dark...

25th Nov 2013 11:21pm

so it appears you are not done, yet..
excellent, paul...

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