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Flashback [Personal]
Have you heard about me?
Of course you have, I'm sure.
I'm the one you constantly attempt to rid your mind of;
with no prevail at all.
I'm the feeling of guilt and agony
bestowed upon your pretty little head
with a sign saying "I told you so!"
The booming noise above you preventing
you from sleep each night for what you've done...
Yeah, it's all coming back now,isn't it?
Because of you I am also the painfully vivid memory of trauma
in a young girls mind, therefore rewinding a certain event in her head
each day just to unravel new emotions, she never knew she felt.
I am the therapy office she sits in, the tissues used and tossed in the basket beside her. The tears in her eyes.
I am the blood rushing to her head from all the fear and anxiety. I am the trust she will never feel again. I am the result of all this calamity.
Loneliness
Panic
Fear
Flashbacks
The damage has been done and you are the one to blame...
Of course you have, I'm sure.
I'm the one you constantly attempt to rid your mind of;
with no prevail at all.
I'm the feeling of guilt and agony
bestowed upon your pretty little head
with a sign saying "I told you so!"
The booming noise above you preventing
you from sleep each night for what you've done...
Yeah, it's all coming back now,isn't it?
Because of you I am also the painfully vivid memory of trauma
in a young girls mind, therefore rewinding a certain event in her head
each day just to unravel new emotions, she never knew she felt.
I am the therapy office she sits in, the tissues used and tossed in the basket beside her. The tears in her eyes.
I am the blood rushing to her head from all the fear and anxiety. I am the trust she will never feel again. I am the result of all this calamity.
Loneliness
Panic
Fear
Flashbacks
The damage has been done and you are the one to blame...
Published 27th Jan 2011
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27th Jan 2011 4:36am
You achieved song-lyric standard. I truly believed the last line was a song lyric. Beautiful analysing of your own mind.
Well done.
LA
Well done.
LA
27th Jan 2011 8:52am
this is an extremely raw and heartfelt poem and i agree with L.A....
you wrote this very well and i loved the way you said you are the therapy office she sits in, the tissues used and tossed in the basket beside her. The tears in her eyes.
I am the blood rushing to her head from all the fear and anxiety. I am the trust she will never feel again. I am the result of all this calamity. ... that just made the piece amazing..
the last line is brilliant too. it made me want to cry because its what my heart is constantly saying about someone who caused me alot of pain. keep your brilliant writing up ^.^
you wrote this very well and i loved the way you said you are the therapy office she sits in, the tissues used and tossed in the basket beside her. The tears in her eyes.
I am the blood rushing to her head from all the fear and anxiety. I am the trust she will never feel again. I am the result of all this calamity. ... that just made the piece amazing..
the last line is brilliant too. it made me want to cry because its what my heart is constantly saying about someone who caused me alot of pain. keep your brilliant writing up ^.^
