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What will I become?
I can't lie to myself.
I'm scared shitless.
My dad is Bipolar.
My Grandma is paranoid schizophrenic.
The dieases are herditary.
I'm scared.
People say I show no signs.
I'm calm and normal acting
But I'm still scared.
If I am like them.
I will have enough sence to get some medicine.
I hope.
I'm terrified.
I'm scared shitless.
My dad is Bipolar.
My Grandma is paranoid schizophrenic.
The dieases are herditary.
I'm scared.
People say I show no signs.
I'm calm and normal acting
But I'm still scared.
If I am like them.
I will have enough sence to get some medicine.
I hope.
I'm terrified.
Published 27th Jan 2011
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27th Jan 2011 9:01am
First of all i'm sorry that you are feeling this way and i recommend you talk your fears over with a close friend of family member.
second of all your poem is good. it has a lovely structure and its straight to the point leaving me completely satisfied because i dont have to leave niggly little comments :)
its a good write. be proud... poetry is always a good release... and my advice ?
try be happy... dont worry on statistics or anything and just be yourself... theres nothing that can leave you feeling worse... than beating yourself up with worry x
second of all your poem is good. it has a lovely structure and its straight to the point leaving me completely satisfied because i dont have to leave niggly little comments :)
its a good write. be proud... poetry is always a good release... and my advice ?
try be happy... dont worry on statistics or anything and just be yourself... theres nothing that can leave you feeling worse... than beating yourself up with worry x
27th Jan 2011 7:40pm
