her wet lips...

oh my,..:)

I know, I know...:)

Ummm....Aren't you the clever one, my Friend?? ;)

SOOO Sexy S l y---to be certain! LOL!

Too much,
perhaps..? :)

lol... erotic...
This is a nice piece of surprise. lol

Wonderfully composed!


Darker

I fail to be
composed

at times
like this..:)

damn well done.
snuck up on me!

I never did! That must
have been somebody
else..:)

but seriously,
thanks...

fab and brilliant!
my new favorite of yours, paul...

thanks jag...
she's quite

a favourite
of mine..:)

mmm, succinctly perfect! the brevity with which you consistently describe a picture with many possible observational interpretations is amazing Paul

Thanks very much, my
friend...I like to keep it
short

(at least that's
 what she says..:)

oh, dear dear dear......

watch the birdie & smile

if only brief
ly...

Paul, that's
an erotic masterpiece which
really turns me on!

then I am as
happy as
any poem of
mine has
ever made
me..:)

Shall I rephrase it?
Could have commented
on it more elegantly.
Perhaps :-).

perhaps...
but no..:)

Did you know Paul that this is your highest grossing read so far, at 800? A great little poem too, romantic, well almost.

u said all
you showed all
gals will naturally fall
as you show them a night's fall
well read maiden lust
I only read the most read
of lovelrs poets
have u ever cumm
to again's den
thanks  nice 1