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She's Perfect

Skys' were gloomy and clouds was all that
followed me around,
rain fell hard leaving him drenched.

People he saw were figments of his distorted vision
he always had from all the stuff he addicted himself to,
he tried to give it all up.

The new high he had was for her,
the girl across from him gazing upon his poor profile.

She saw so much more in him than anyone had ever saw,
giving hope was what she did transforming him from
a wasted piece of scum to... a somebody.

Falling in love was all he could do, his addiction
to her was astounding which he could not believe it was possible.

He knew this was true love the way she gave him that look everyday he saw her, that gorgeous glow she let off and the aroma he was so attracted to.. her scent was unbearable.

When all hope was lost he found her and knew there was one
fact that no one nor nothing could ever change,
she's perfect...
Written by Donnydarko
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