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Moment
My mind tells me not too
When you touch me there's nothing I can do
My body craves, it takes over me
Put it inside, for my moment of glee
When you touch me there's nothing I can do
My body craves, it takes over me
Put it inside, for my moment of glee
Published 13th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
13th Nov 2013 5:25pm
sweetwoman,
Being in the moment, you have it out there, or 'in there' in your case ; )
Welcome to DU!
tornado
Being in the moment, you have it out there, or 'in there' in your case ; )
Welcome to DU!
tornado
13th Nov 2013 5:31pm
Anonymous
13th Nov 2013 9:40pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th Sep 2018 3:45pm
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14th Nov 2013 8:35pm
It was a passing thought in which i decided to share. I have never really wrote before. thank you for all your comments!
