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Cloud 8

One cloud short of victory

another sore taste of defeat

I gotta do what it takes to win it now

And have the courage to land on my feet

I can't let the heights get the best of me

I must progress before it's too late

I've been treading these skies for a while now

In an attempt to escape from cloud eight




-"Lucid Dreamer: The Story Of Two"
My second release "Cloud 8" comes from my 1st of 2 poem books I have written and am hoping to release within the next few weeks! Feedback is great! So tell me what you think and don't forget to read my other poems!
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