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When she kissed me...
...I felt the blood rush
when my face she grasped
we touched,
mouth to mouth at last
so evident my blush
her sweet lips touchin' mine
I was lost to a 'space in time'
a place indescribable, divine
when she kissed me
exhilaration overwhelmed my soul,
I shattered...
into fragmented bliss, no longer whole...
when she kissed me
I heard the angel's chime
and at that very moment
I knew, I'd never wash away
that day she kissed me
and the feel of her lips
'pon mine...
*FYI, this is purely fictional, seems I can't be THAT
lucky, it was inspired by a kiss that a Destiny's child
member (Kelly Rowland planted on Simon Cowe)
gifted her co judge on the X Factor! lol I couldn't help but wonder
how Simon must've felt inside lol*
when my face she grasped
we touched,
mouth to mouth at last
so evident my blush
her sweet lips touchin' mine
I was lost to a 'space in time'
a place indescribable, divine
when she kissed me
exhilaration overwhelmed my soul,
I shattered...
into fragmented bliss, no longer whole...
when she kissed me
I heard the angel's chime
and at that very moment
I knew, I'd never wash away
that day she kissed me
and the feel of her lips
'pon mine...
*FYI, this is purely fictional, seems I can't be THAT
lucky, it was inspired by a kiss that a Destiny's child
member (Kelly Rowland planted on Simon Cowe)
gifted her co judge on the X Factor! lol I couldn't help but wonder
how Simon must've felt inside lol*
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 8th Nov 2013
| Edited 11th Nov 2013
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Re: When she kissed me...
8th Nov 2013 5:29pm
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8th Nov 2013 5:34pm
Thank you! I'm happy you liked my ink n my pencils! lol
appreciate it much :)
appreciate it much :)
Re: When she kissed me...
8th Nov 2013 6:13pm
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8th Nov 2013 6:25pm
Re: When she kissed me...
8th Nov 2013 6:32pm
re: Re: When she kissed me...
8th Nov 2013 6:55pm
Aaawww thank you! Appreciate the time n thoughts...I shall return the favor soon :)
Re: When she kissed me...
8th Nov 2013 8:34pm
this was Beautiful!!!
fav lines:
"her sweet lips touchin' mine
I was lost to a 'space in time'
a place indescribable, divine" ahhh yes heavenly ink!!!
fav lines:
"her sweet lips touchin' mine
I was lost to a 'space in time'
a place indescribable, divine" ahhh yes heavenly ink!!!
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re: Re: When she kissed me...
8th Nov 2013 8:55pm
Well I do believe you are an authority of inks laced in beauty becuz u certainly turn out a til on of them! So a big thank you my sweet lady, truly appreciate you!
Re: When she kissed me...
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8th Nov 2013 10:31pm
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re: Re: When she kissed me...
9th Nov 2013 4:29am
Hey there bro! As always it's wonderful hearing from you
n always appreciate your very kind comments :)
n always appreciate your very kind comments :)
Re: When she kissed me...
9th Nov 2013 2:16am
re: Re: When she kissed me...
9th Nov 2013 4:33am
Thanks bro. I feel the same about your work :)
Grateful as always I am for your support too :)
Grateful as always I am for your support too :)
Re: When she kissed me...
Anonymous
9th Nov 2013 4:22am
aww this is so sweet!!!
and if not Kelly i'm sure some other beautiful girl will be in your arms, keep on writing PIKM, you got the gift.
and if not Kelly i'm sure some other beautiful girl will be in your arms, keep on writing PIKM, you got the gift.

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re: Re: When she kissed me...
9th Nov 2013 4:41am
Thank you, though I highly doubt it
I have a disease called, "no matter if I want them
give don't want me" but yea 'dreaming' bout
having those types is easy... I Appreciate u support :)
I have a disease called, "no matter if I want them
give don't want me" but yea 'dreaming' bout
having those types is easy... I Appreciate u support :)
Re: When she kissed me...
9th Nov 2013 4:32pm
Love the poem as well as the
beautiful and sensual drawing.
Kisses are so intimate
and so is your poem.
beautiful and sensual drawing.
Kisses are so intimate
and so is your poem.
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re: Re: When she kissed me...
9th Nov 2013 5:25pm
Mmm Yea they are n also one of my favorite past times ok appreciate ya sweetness!
Re: When she kissed me...
9th Nov 2013 9:50pm
re: Re: When she kissed me...
9th Nov 2013 9:53pm
Lol you did? were u thinking like me, that Simon HAD to be loving that shit!? lol oh n thank u my sweetheat, I appreciate u always :)
Re: When she kissed me...
wow kinda really nice piece... u ripped Simons feelings? that's not easy...but yo you are a talent... I wonder what he must've exactly felt..?? write on..
cyanide..
cyanide..
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re: Re: When she kissed me...
11th Nov 2013 1:46pm
Yea, I wondered too, especially when the camera
showed his face, he looked to me like he was definitely
n pleasantly surprised! lol... Thanks a ton bro. I truly appreciate your support always :)
showed his face, he looked to me like he was definitely
n pleasantly surprised! lol... Thanks a ton bro. I truly appreciate your support always :)
Re: When she kissed me...
14th Nov 2013 8:43pm
re: Re: When she kissed me...
14th Nov 2013 10:39pm
Well thank you! I'm happy you liked my piece... I hope that whatever or whenever u decide to visit again you will not (ever) be disappointed :) appreciate ur time n thoughts SW. :)