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Needs
You been gone far too long;
Three hours,
fourteen minutes
counting..
ticking down
seconds,
waiting here;
Closer..
to the edge;
Baby,
it's wet outside
come home,
please,
come home
and into me,
make me,
too..
I'm torn between,
you.. waiting..
between fingers,
mine..
close,
at the edge
lingering
under the fabric,
fabric is all I got left baby.
right
you see?
see my needs,
don't you?
that's why you gots to be
hurrying,
hurry home..
can't..
I can't wait
till then..
thoughts of you,
touching me
Inside me..
Me
Touching myself........
Three hours,
fourteen minutes
counting..
ticking down
seconds,
waiting here;
Closer..
to the edge;
Baby,
it's wet outside
come home,
please,
come home
and into me,
make me,
too..
I'm torn between,
you.. waiting..
between fingers,
mine..
close,
at the edge
lingering
under the fabric,
fabric is all I got left baby.
right
you see?
see my needs,
don't you?
that's why you gots to be
hurrying,
hurry home..
can't..
I can't wait
till then..
thoughts of you,
touching me
Inside me..
Me
Touching myself........
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re: Re: Needs
8th Nov 2013 3:21pm
aww thankyou
Had the picture first and worked around it
the picture so very much goes with the poem
had three to choose from :)
and before anyone asks what I was doing looking at nude women lol I get inspiration for some of my poetry through pictures sensual or otherwise xD
Had the picture first and worked around it
the picture so very much goes with the poem
had three to choose from :)
and before anyone asks what I was doing looking at nude women lol I get inspiration for some of my poetry through pictures sensual or otherwise xD
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8th Nov 2013 3:21pm
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8th Nov 2013 3:22pm
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Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 3:28pm
I'm driving as fast as I can Love, slick fingers in mind, slick roads ahead..but I'm coming hard!
Divine scribe Miss..;)
Divine scribe Miss..;)
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8th Nov 2013 3:39pm
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Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 4:17pm
Rose,
Best definition of "HURRY!" I've seen in a long time! ; ) No....I'd never be one to question where inspiration comes from....LOL!!!
Loved your line: "fabric is all I got left baby"
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Best definition of "HURRY!" I've seen in a long time! ; ) No....I'd never be one to question where inspiration comes from....LOL!!!
Loved your line: "fabric is all I got left baby"
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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Re: Needs
8th Nov 2013 4:35pm
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8th Nov 2013 5:20pm
Re: Needs
8th Nov 2013 8:39pm
Ahhhh the glorious tension in this piece! Makes one want to prolong the agony by phoning and saying "don't you dare start without me" ;)
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8th Nov 2013 9:16pm
Trust me
From past experience
Being on the edge
Is no fun
Being told to wait is torture
XD
From past experience
Being on the edge
Is no fun
Being told to wait is torture
XD
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8th Nov 2013 9:43pm
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Wanting and needing
Fully paid up member
As for waiting
Like you
I have little self discipline
If he said wait Im on my way
He's got twenty minutes
Or its the small room
XD
Fully paid up member
As for waiting
Like you
I have little self discipline
If he said wait Im on my way
He's got twenty minutes
Or its the small room
XD
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9th Nov 2013 00:28am
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What u say?
Sorry was in the small room..
Yeah go me lol
Twenty minutes
Or the shop gets the
Shutters dropped
Afterall
Rules are rules
Sorry was in the small room..
Yeah go me lol
Twenty minutes
Or the shop gets the
Shutters dropped
Afterall
Rules are rules
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9th Nov 2013 8:02am
so is this small room big enough for two or is it a single seater ? ;)
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9th Nov 2013 8:32am
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9th Nov 2013 6:51am
Great lingering desire drips from this piece ... Very sensuous scribe.
LSP
LSP
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Re: Needs
9th Nov 2013 7:12am
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Anonymous
9th Nov 2013 8:39am
"If you're not here in 15 minutes,I'm starting without you", springs to mind very clearly here. XD
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Lol@petit
Yes agreed
Funny how quick they can be
When the clocks ticking down
Actually its a win win for us girls
"Did you wait for me"?
"Yes baby I waited"...
Yes agreed
Funny how quick they can be
When the clocks ticking down
Actually its a win win for us girls
"Did you wait for me"?
"Yes baby I waited"...
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Anonymous
10th Nov 2013 1:02am
*giggling here...
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Re: Needs
17th Nov 2013 6:10am
Interesting read-like the end
I hate waiting especially when things run later then promised so I relate to this piece kinda there
I hate waiting especially when things run later then promised so I relate to this piece kinda there
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