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'Progression of the Clock'
Autumn's vibrant colors
cascade upon earth's frostless, yet chilled
skin
kissing it in layers...
a blanket,
of it's love to warm her
before the bitterness
of december's sorrow begins...
and the songs,
that softly used to lullabye
the natives to distances beyond
now freeze,
stilled in muted melodies...
cascade upon earth's frostless, yet chilled
skin
kissing it in layers...
a blanket,
of it's love to warm her
before the bitterness
of december's sorrow begins...
and the songs,
that softly used to lullabye
the natives to distances beyond
now freeze,
stilled in muted melodies...
Published 8th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 4:45am
This is truly lovely.
8th Nov 2013 4:48am
Thank you, I'm shocked by this visit, but I'm very grateful
for it n your thoughts.
for it n your thoughts.
8th Nov 2013 7:58am
8th Nov 2013 11:53am
Thank you, I'm grateful for your thoughts on my ink n will return the favor ASAP :)
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 5:01am
I like the imagery of nature in contrast to emotions.
Sublime ink PIKM, very lovely!
Sublime ink PIKM, very lovely!
8th Nov 2013 5:09am
Thank you lady, I'm happy you enjoyed this and as always I'm deeply grateful for your support always :)
8th Nov 2013 12:33pm
8th Nov 2013 12:45pm
Aaaawwww n I love your beautiful comment! C'mere n let me kiss u! Muah! lol thank u my sweetheart :)
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 1:57pm
colors! notes of seasons past and coming surely upon the paths we walk, from seashore straws and mangrove greens to laurel reds and mountain maple orange..Bro, I love your mind...your interpretations are sublime, serene and insightful. I'm always glad to read you Poe
8th Nov 2013 2:03pm
Damn bro. I truly truly thank you from the bottom of my heart, that was such a wonderful compliment you gifted me...I hope to always inspire and be deserving of such support :)
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 2:09pm
your voice is multi-dimensional my Brother, I see you in the classroom or in the boardroom, on the pulpit or on the stage always equally at ease with words for everyman..plumber to politician..speak up! You're a damn fine wordsmith with an enviable delivery :)
8th Nov 2013 2:30pm
Aaawww dagg dude, stop it already u gonna make me fly away lol thanks big time! :)
8th Nov 2013 3:24pm
oh how did I overlook you
creative poet you are
going to read more of you :)
loved it
creative poet you are
going to read more of you :)
loved it
8th Nov 2013 3:26pm
I was wondering that myself! lol jk... Thank you so much
sweetheart :) truly appreciate it :)
sweetheart :) truly appreciate it :)
8th Nov 2013 7:47pm
I can see you wooing any lady with these breath taking lines. Ink that spills romance.
9th Nov 2013 4:21am
Well I'm not sure ANY woman not on a poetry site would give two flips about my words but it's a nice lil dream to think it possible lol... Thank you so much my brotha from Anotha motha! lol
8th Nov 2013 9:03pm
Amazing Scribe Sir!!! this left me with a tranquil feel and instantly made me think of day light savings ending...as i picture all the rustic colors of autumn,and imagine a lone leaf dancing in the wind as it fall..Beautiful!!!!
9th Nov 2013 4:22am
Ur a beautiful woman, I love your sweetness my friend! Thank you so much, I appreciate it much :)
9th Nov 2013 4:29pm
9th Nov 2013 5:22pm
Aaaawww thank you! you have me blushing like crazy lol
Truly grateful for you n all your support :)
Truly grateful for you n all your support :)
