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Broken
You push me out the door
I fall to the floor
I'm bleeding
and I can't shake the feeling
that this is my last day
before I go away
I fall to the floor
I'm bleeding
and I can't shake the feeling
that this is my last day
before I go away
Published 23rd Jan 2011
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23rd Jan 2011 9:36am
and i love how this is short. coz words acnt experss the feeling well. its a pain in the heart that you have to of experienced to understand it.
its painful to read. you did a great job keep it up
its painful to read. you did a great job keep it up
23rd Jan 2011 8:22pm
a short and painful poem which is easy to relate to. keep up the good writing x
23rd Jan 2011 9:18pm
thank you to you both im very glad you and others are able to relate to it!!
