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Fallen
I have fallen for you
With all your light and laughter and love...
With all your darkness
I have fallen for your soul that whispers to me
Of promises for tomorrow
And a journey that will never end
But i know that we can never be
For we are other
Of different ways and different worlds
Of different pathes that intertwine yet never quite meet
And we may share a stolen moment
Or live on borrowed time
but
No matter how much i wish it
.....i hold no illusions that you are mine.....
I have fallen for you
For all your joy and all your shadows
...and all your secrets locked within
And i will love you with all i have and all that i have ever been
.....and when you wake upon the morrow...in the light of the morning sun....
I will be naught but a distant memory
A smokey dream that hasn't come
With all your light and laughter and love...
With all your darkness
I have fallen for your soul that whispers to me
Of promises for tomorrow
And a journey that will never end
But i know that we can never be
For we are other
Of different ways and different worlds
Of different pathes that intertwine yet never quite meet
And we may share a stolen moment
Or live on borrowed time
but
No matter how much i wish it
.....i hold no illusions that you are mine.....
I have fallen for you
For all your joy and all your shadows
...and all your secrets locked within
And i will love you with all i have and all that i have ever been
.....and when you wake upon the morrow...in the light of the morning sun....
I will be naught but a distant memory
A smokey dream that hasn't come
Published 5th Nov 2013
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5th Nov 2013 12:10pm
This is just marvelous. How bitter sweet it is to fall for someone who isn't ours. Fave part was "I have fallen for you
For all your joy and all your shadows
...and all your secrets locked within
And i will love you with all i have and all that i have ever been "
For all your joy and all your shadows
...and all your secrets locked within
And i will love you with all i have and all that i have ever been "
6th Nov 2013 7:03am
5th Nov 2013 5:28pm
Wow! Wow! Wow! Girl, you have just painted an image of my now....This is flawlessly written!
By far one of your best writes to date, in my humble opinion. Brilliantly crafted! Sublime Read!
Made my repeat list! :)
Poetic love~
By far one of your best writes to date, in my humble opinion. Brilliantly crafted! Sublime Read!
Made my repeat list! :)
Poetic love~
6th Nov 2013 7:17am
I am speechless that any of my work would make your list and I am also truly humbled that you see improvements in my ink. Your feedback and poetic love is always greatly appreciated! :)
9th Nov 2013 9:51pm
This is just so spot on...filled with emotion, cirtainty and sure submission...loved it...
12th Nov 2013 6:29pm
12th Nov 2013 7:20pm
Read ur bio bout not being a poet, n now reading this
n my conclusion? You are most def. A POET! :)
n my conclusion? You are most def. A POET! :)
13th Nov 2013 3:26am
Thank you :) this made me smile, I'm glad you think so and humbled as well
19th Nov 2013 3:24am
19th Nov 2013 6:12am
