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Ballerina Dreams
Unlocking hearts with turning keys
Creaking joints underused
ballerina poised, silently tiptoed
Her fragrance, my senses intoxicated
Overloading memories, tiny hands
Treasure chest, ballerina dreams
As I watch her dance through the years
like yesterday, once again she moves
With her lullaby tune, till I'm taken back
In ballerina dreams
Creaking joints underused
ballerina poised, silently tiptoed
Her fragrance, my senses intoxicated
Overloading memories, tiny hands
Treasure chest, ballerina dreams
As I watch her dance through the years
like yesterday, once again she moves
With her lullaby tune, till I'm taken back
In ballerina dreams
Published 5th Nov 2013
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5th Nov 2013 6:23am
I love this Rose! I can hear the music now...what was the tune? For me this piece is evocative of our yearnings for childhood. Thank you...well done!
5th Nov 2013 6:35am
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5th Nov 2013 9:03pm
I had a ballerina gig once. Did you ever see Fantasia? I was the hippo second from the left :)
5th Nov 2013 9:09pm
i was forth in the second row.. you got me coffee between takes, i said i would return the favour and meet later..i didn't
ooops
ooops
5th Nov 2013 9:22pm
So you're the one!!! I really had my tutu in a knot about that...you owe me sistuh :)
5th Nov 2013 9:33pm
yeah..
i'm the one
neo? who
nah hippooo!
watch my girly moves
watch out hippo boy
I downloaded kung foo
and i'm packing too
there can be only one, but..
maybe room in my wallow water for a small one
i'm the one
neo? who
nah hippooo!
watch my girly moves
watch out hippo boy
I downloaded kung foo
and i'm packing too
there can be only one, but..
maybe room in my wallow water for a small one
5th Nov 2013 9:41pm
As you hold up your thumb and forefinger taking my scanty measurement ;)
5th Nov 2013 9:55pm
Well the waters cold
Thats a good thing..
Eye watering good
Seems that love six poetry snake
Escaped over to this page...
Thats a good thing..
Eye watering good
Seems that love six poetry snake
Escaped over to this page...
5th Nov 2013 10:27pm
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5th Nov 2013 12:57pm
*I really like this, it reminds me of my jewelry box I had as a child. Beautiful imagery*
5th Nov 2013 1:44pm
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 2:42pm
These are the bud of all dreams, looking at a beautiful ballerina gracefully dancing, transporting us to magical places.
Beautiful scribe my dear Rose.
Beautiful scribe my dear Rose.
5th Nov 2013 2:49pm
thankyou Vee
it's what i remember as a child
my mothers musical jewelry box
enchanting and very magical
it's what i remember as a child
my mothers musical jewelry box
enchanting and very magical
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 11:26pm
I loved this! I still love watching a great dance performance. What a wonderful piece.
6th Nov 2013 5:56am
6th Nov 2013 00:51am
the music box
plays and the
ballerina turns
and...
I can almost
see half remembered
old black and white
thrillers with this image...
which I guess is an
irrelevant comment but I
found it very evocative..:)
plays and the
ballerina turns
and...
I can almost
see half remembered
old black and white
thrillers with this image...
which I guess is an
irrelevant comment but I
found it very evocative..:)
6th Nov 2013 5:57am
Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 4:45am
Music Box Dancer...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2N_tmH6y7ng
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2N_tmH6y7ng
6th Nov 2013 6:02am
