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"Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
Oh dear god...
How he loved her.
Soul,
and body whole.
How he wonders
why he's suddenly
fucking nothing
more than an empty hole...
Damn...
How he cherished
those moments,
stupid, as he was...
her hapless emotional landscape,
he'd roam it
A nomad, deserted...
starved of her love's potion
Needed her like life-saving
water in a dehydrated ocean.
How he missed her voice,
her vice was he.
Thought he saw so much
in those silly ass dreams,
but the truth of it really
was, he couldn't see
He never knew
there'd come a day,
when she was gone.
Now, fucking broken for life,
so what's the sense in moving on?
Past, no longer a future,
and whatever joy did occur
that shit was just an imaginary blur
because now he simply feels
like a damn joke for having loved her...
How he loved her.
Soul,
and body whole.
How he wonders
why he's suddenly
fucking nothing
more than an empty hole...
Damn...
How he cherished
those moments,
stupid, as he was...
her hapless emotional landscape,
he'd roam it
A nomad, deserted...
starved of her love's potion
Needed her like life-saving
water in a dehydrated ocean.
How he missed her voice,
her vice was he.
Thought he saw so much
in those silly ass dreams,
but the truth of it really
was, he couldn't see
He never knew
there'd come a day,
when she was gone.
Now, fucking broken for life,
so what's the sense in moving on?
Past, no longer a future,
and whatever joy did occur
that shit was just an imaginary blur
because now he simply feels
like a damn joke for having loved her...
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Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
5th Nov 2013 00:55am
Heartbreak is hard but loving someone who doesn't love you is harder. We've all played the fool and the pain felt like it would never end, until one day... you realize you're no longer hurting. Time is a healer! I love this Poe! Hope it's just a poet's imagination and not real. Witty title btw....Xoxo
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5th Nov 2013 1:24am
Oh it's real... BUT in the past lol thank you
my sweet sweet heart, I truly n always appreciate
you so very much! N yea, I kinda like twisting concepts on titles n whatnot lol
my sweet sweet heart, I truly n always appreciate
you so very much! N yea, I kinda like twisting concepts on titles n whatnot lol
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Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 2:37am
It's a learning experience, in the end you came out of it as a better and wiser person.
as RainC stated, time is a great healer, and thankfully time is on our side.
as RainC stated, time is a great healer, and thankfully time is on our side.
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5th Nov 2013 2:57am
I love your positivity my sweet lady, but I can't even assume I have another 5 mins. To be honest, I'm grateful
always to still be here though lol... Thank u so much my sweetie pie :)
always to still be here though lol... Thank u so much my sweetie pie :)
Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
5th Nov 2013 3:59am
hmm its a very relevant topic that u r talking about....i myself been in that shoes hence can get the whole emotional idea of yours.. your ink is beautiful ..
write on..
cyanide..
write on..
cyanide..
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re: Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
5th Nov 2013 2:09pm
Thanks bro! Yea I'd like to say no one should feel
this kinda pain, but hey in aware it happens far too often
for that not be relateable... Appreciate your support always :)
this kinda pain, but hey in aware it happens far too often
for that not be relateable... Appreciate your support always :)
Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
5th Nov 2013 5:21am
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5th Nov 2013 2:10pm
Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
5th Nov 2013 3:15pm
Agree with RainC--(but then again who couldn't lol) love the play in the title..descriptive lines..such as "How he wonders
why he's suddenly
fucking nothing
more than an empty hole..." kept me going. Happens to many--what doesn't kill us makes us stronger! (hopefully!)
why he's suddenly
fucking nothing
more than an empty hole..." kept me going. Happens to many--what doesn't kill us makes us stronger! (hopefully!)
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re: Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
5th Nov 2013 3:28pm
Yea I'm so familiar with that saying, but here's one for you
"What does kill us, makes us DEAD" lmao sorry couldn't help myself lol... Thank u my friend, I'm forever grateful for all ur support :)
"What does kill us, makes us DEAD" lmao sorry couldn't help myself lol... Thank u my friend, I'm forever grateful for all ur support :)
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5th Nov 2013 3:30pm
lol..well arent you the jokester! :) I would say behave but that might be too much!!! :0
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5th Nov 2013 3:34pm
Lol damn you are so right bout that being too much
Becuz I'm pretty good, but I'm really good at being bad! lol
n yea I love to make ppl laugh as much as possible :)
Becuz I'm pretty good, but I'm really good at being bad! lol
n yea I love to make ppl laugh as much as possible :)
Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
5th Nov 2013 6:40pm
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5th Nov 2013 6:51pm
Yea, you're speaking to the choir with that one my sweetness!
lol I'm a poster child for losing those I care about but I guess I'm a glutton for punishment huh? lol thanks a ton my friend :)
lol I'm a poster child for losing those I care about but I guess I'm a glutton for punishment huh? lol thanks a ton my friend :)
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Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
5th Nov 2013 7:32pm
Oh, Madonne! I have been here. We all get taken for a ride at some point. What can we do? Stay locked up in a tower the rest of our lives? We roll the dice on love, every time. I've been hurt, & I'm still hurting, but gods-be-damned I won't try this again at some point. I might say I won't, but deep down I know better. A bit more cautious & cynical, maybe, but we'll get it right at some point, & give of ourselves to a lover who truly deserves it. It helps to know that we're not the only ones, eh? That empty hole will be filled again. Thanks for the story. Poetik.
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re: Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
5th Nov 2013 7:56pm
No thank you for such an honest and heartfelt comment, that means a lot to me... Appreciate your time n thoughts sir!
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5th Nov 2013 10:07pm
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5th Nov 2013 11:29pm
Yea, if you CAN get back up, sometimes one may get both legs broken n then where are they then? lol
Seriously, I'm grateful for your thoughts on my ink. :)
Seriously, I'm grateful for your thoughts on my ink. :)
Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
6th Nov 2013 3:33am
Love the dehydrated ocean metaphor. So compelling. I'm in love with this
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6th Nov 2013 3:48am
Wow... I'm in love with ur comment! :) thank you so much for this wonderful thought poetess :)
Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
6th Nov 2013 7:18pm
this was oozing with agony, very emotionally charged lines here..unfortunately i know this feeling all to well,clarity always lies on the other side of blur..Splendid Scribe Sir!!! love the title also
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re: Re: "Every hottie slays a fool, sometimes..."
6th Nov 2013 7:38pm
Sorry to hear you do know this, but I'm grateful you survived it my dear! And thank you so much for your continued support :)