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A Time To Be Cheesy (Comp. Entry)
Lovely Memories[/font][/font]
You were my first ray of light,
I begun loving you at first sight.
With just a heart-stopping smile,
I felt as if I could run a mile.
My heart beat would race.
Every time I would see your face.
And I couldn't stop my blush.
as my blood would rush.
I would truly get so really shy
every time you kept staring at me in the eye.
If I tried to say your name,
I would stammer it out, which was so lame.
I could never say would I want to.
Because I'm in a daze when I'm with you.
I couldn't believe would even notice me.
Confidence isn't my strength, you see.
I always heard the thumping of my heart in my ears.
And to touch you, I wouldn't even dare.
But you held my hand safely in yours.
any answer I would give would even be slurred.
Our love was sweet like honey.
we were in for love not money.
Though I might add he was well off.
Apart from me, he didn't seem to trust anyone.
It might be corny to love like this.
These are just lovely memories
of a joy that did exist.
For I think, our hearts will always be connected.
This one heart string will always be protected.
It was a love so cute, and pure.
For this affection, there's no cure.
Though we parted and went separate ways.
I know we'll meet again some day.
This was actually sort of a challenge for me.
But I like challenging stuff. XD[/font][/font]
You were my first ray of light,
I begun loving you at first sight.
With just a heart-stopping smile,
I felt as if I could run a mile.
My heart beat would race.
Every time I would see your face.
And I couldn't stop my blush.
as my blood would rush.
I would truly get so really shy
every time you kept staring at me in the eye.
If I tried to say your name,
I would stammer it out, which was so lame.
I could never say would I want to.
Because I'm in a daze when I'm with you.
I couldn't believe would even notice me.
Confidence isn't my strength, you see.
I always heard the thumping of my heart in my ears.
And to touch you, I wouldn't even dare.
But you held my hand safely in yours.
any answer I would give would even be slurred.
Our love was sweet like honey.
we were in for love not money.
Though I might add he was well off.
Apart from me, he didn't seem to trust anyone.
It might be corny to love like this.
These are just lovely memories
of a joy that did exist.
For I think, our hearts will always be connected.
This one heart string will always be protected.
It was a love so cute, and pure.
For this affection, there's no cure.
Though we parted and went separate ways.
I know we'll meet again some day.
This was actually sort of a challenge for me.
But I like challenging stuff. XD[/font][/font]
Published 4th Nov 2013
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4th Nov 2013 7:40pm
5th Nov 2013 2:09am
5th Nov 2013 4:49am
This is delightful - it reminds me of that young first in love feeling we all go through ... And first true heartbreak that sets the tone for what's to come ...
LSP
LSP
6th Nov 2013 9:14pm
thank you.
That's what I was aiming for. ^_^
I glad you you like it.
That's what I was aiming for. ^_^
I glad you you like it.
5th Nov 2013 2:28pm
Well Done...you grabbed the challenge by the horns...reminded me of sweet first love...i love the title..:)
6th Nov 2013 9:17pm
Thank you very much my friend.
I'm so glad I was able to convey that "Young Love" feeling, surprised more ... but yea ... glad.
^_^
:-D
I'm so glad I was able to convey that "Young Love" feeling, surprised more ... but yea ... glad.
^_^
:-D
