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electric storm
sparkled gaze
lost in a clandestine maze
Succumbed to the essence
of the electric storm
your soul,
a smile as bright as the moon crescent
caresses the fractured statue of this heart
to pulverise stone into the rebirth
of a wounded soul
and with such splendor
I am ignited in the darkest night
and spread my wings to take flight
into the wonders of your love.
lost in a clandestine maze
Succumbed to the essence
of the electric storm
your soul,
a smile as bright as the moon crescent
caresses the fractured statue of this heart
to pulverise stone into the rebirth
of a wounded soul
and with such splendor
I am ignited in the darkest night
and spread my wings to take flight
into the wonders of your love.
Published 1st Nov 2013
| Edited 6th Mar 2014
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3rd Nov 2013 11:40am
My Lord what a beautiful piece. Don't give many of these but I nominate this piece for a poetic Oscar! Love these lines when you say,"a smile as bright as the moon crescent
caresses the fractured statue of this heart
to pulverise stone into the rebirth
of a wounded soul." Priceless!
caresses the fractured statue of this heart
to pulverise stone into the rebirth
of a wounded soul." Priceless!
3rd Nov 2013 5:16pm
28th Feb 2014 4:29am
Wonderful write and Awesome read!!
I really like your pen!!
Sir Lancelott
visit sometime
I really like your pen!!
Sir Lancelott
visit sometime
