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that far away look...
I think you're more
attractive when you're
here...
when you're not you seem
a little
distant...
Published 29th Oct 2013
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30th Oct 2013 00:00am
ah and you wonder where her mind has wandered, wanting to reclaim her again.
Lovely!
Lovely!
30th Oct 2013 00:15am
30th Oct 2013 00:22am
Beautiful Piece!!
it just proves that she's always on your mind.
Great Write
Darker
it just proves that she's always on your mind.
Great Write
Darker
30th Oct 2013 00:27am
30th Oct 2013 00:25am
30th Oct 2013 00:32am
Anonymous
30th Oct 2013 00:43am
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30th Oct 2013 1:11am
30th Oct 2013 2:11am
Tasting today on her lips.....
Gazing at tomorrow in her eyes---
without you....
Within the 'invisible' lines, i f e e l the poignancy of this piece. (sigh...of longing)
Gazing at tomorrow in her eyes---
without you....
Within the 'invisible' lines, i f e e l the poignancy of this piece. (sigh...of longing)
30th Oct 2013 2:21am
30th Oct 2013 4:52pm
Anonymous
31st Oct 2013 3:17am
Short and sweet
31st Oct 2013 11:34pm
1st Nov 2013 00:29am
2nd Nov 2013 10:58pm
That escaped my eyes ... shame on me.
You have so much ideas and
you're so good at knittig
them together
into a soft blanket
of letters and words.
Love that!
You have so much ideas and
you're so good at knittig
them together
into a soft blanket
of letters and words.
Love that!
3rd Nov 2013 00:16am
and I always love your
comments, although I
would forego even them
for your poems..:)
comments, although I
would forego even them
for your poems..:)
3rd Nov 2013 1:14pm
