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The Neverending Dream
A touch,
upon the heart
tenderly settles
rescuing him
from deep slumber
in sorrow's tomb
for emotions
to wisk away
like a daffodil's petals
in flight
on a sole journey
within passion's swoon...
Yet he's a man
in need of serious loving
in the physical
tears fall silent
within an orchestra
of solitude's pain
as a soul keeps pulling
at wanton urges...
it's almost mystical
such blissful recollections
of yesterday's interludes wane...
still battling on
in the name of love's consistant war
the prize for victory...
key to the heart
that's keeps giving more...
upon the heart
tenderly settles
rescuing him
from deep slumber
in sorrow's tomb
for emotions
to wisk away
like a daffodil's petals
in flight
on a sole journey
within passion's swoon...
Yet he's a man
in need of serious loving
in the physical
tears fall silent
within an orchestra
of solitude's pain
as a soul keeps pulling
at wanton urges...
it's almost mystical
such blissful recollections
of yesterday's interludes wane...
still battling on
in the name of love's consistant war
the prize for victory...
key to the heart
that's keeps giving more...
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Re: The Neverending Dream
29th Oct 2013 7:22pm
That's an absolute romantic
and longing write, Poe.
Sometimes dreams come true
and a key to the yearning heart
will be found.
and longing write, Poe.
Sometimes dreams come true
and a key to the yearning heart
will be found.
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re: Re: The Neverending Dream
29th Oct 2013 8:04pm
So I've heard, no personal experience with any coming true for me though lol... Thank u my sweetness :)
Re: The Neverending Dream
Anonymous
29th Oct 2013 11:54pm
Don't ever stop dreaming, it may just come true, someday.
Beautiful with soft edges! I love this scribe.
Beautiful with soft edges! I love this scribe.
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re: Re: The Neverending Dream
30th Oct 2013 00:46am
I doubt it BUT I also doubt I'll ever stop dreaming too lol
Thanks a bunch sweetie, muah!
Thanks a bunch sweetie, muah!
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30th Oct 2013 00:53am
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re: Re: The Neverending Dream
30th Oct 2013 1:53am
Oh wow, Broomie u have me light headed! :) that was such a very sweet compliment n I'm flattered n humbled by it... Thank
you!
you!
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30th Oct 2013 10:24pm
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31st Oct 2013 3:07pm
Re: The Neverending Dream
30th Oct 2013 3:34pm
Deep write my brother and well put. Keep doing your thing , for you do it well.
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re: Re: The Neverending Dream
30th Oct 2013 4:16pm
Thank you bro. I shall try to always give what I can
n for as long as I can... I am grateful for all the positive re-enforcement you gift me with :)
n for as long as I can... I am grateful for all the positive re-enforcement you gift me with :)
Re: The Neverending Dream
30th Oct 2013 5:37pm
"still battling on
in the name of love's consistant war
the prize for victory...
key to the heart
that's keeps giving more... "<--lovely...
I love your Neverending dream...Xo
in the name of love's consistant war
the prize for victory...
key to the heart
that's keeps giving more... "<--lovely...
I love your Neverending dream...Xo
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re: Re: The Neverending Dream
30th Oct 2013 6:46pm
I love your support... U feed my desired to continue on my dear, n I truly thank n appreciate you for it :)
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31st Oct 2013 9:33pm
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19th Nov 2013 1:58am
Re: The Neverending Dream
30th Oct 2013 11:29pm
Aweeeeeee, This is Just Soooo Sweet
It Will Happen and When It Does...
It Will Be Amazing - BELIEVE
XXX's
Tami
It Will Happen and When It Does...
It Will Be Amazing - BELIEVE
XXX's
Tami
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re: Re: The Neverending Dream
30th Oct 2013 11:58pm
Thank u for your sweet comment, though I always hold into a lil
Belief it's kinda hard to stay that way when it feels like I'm
simply wasting time n losing my mind lol... Appreciate u so much :)
Belief it's kinda hard to stay that way when it feels like I'm
simply wasting time n losing my mind lol... Appreciate u so much :)