firefly

that surge of emotional reaction to her love for you makes it. it almost accidentally says 'i love you too'. [:

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Nice.

I love that last line.
<3

i had thought of something i was gonna change or try for the last line but now i can't recall it so it'll stay like this glad you approve :D <3

Despite of being in poetry, you have not at all wasted the subject and what I have liked is not the boldness but your frankness over here...and that last line dear, "(close my eyes and die)"...it's awesome...I am re-reading repeatedly:-)

ah yeah fucking and love seem to be the endless muses there's always a new perspective or different way of saying the same kind of things over it.. ah cool! glad you like it though i was unsure of that last line like i was telling merda i had a different line i was going to change it to but by the time i got back to the computer i had forgotten so it will stay as is : )

Pretty good enjoyed it

Short and to the point~ great write!

thanks : ) some of these earlier sex ones i don't like much anymore. there's a few diamonds in the rough. but mostly... idk too demanding... or demanded of

Nice