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Desert Heart
She appeared unto me as if a mirage
In my desolate desert heart
I thirst for her love
My radiant dove
But alas my soul is parched
If she could only trust
the possibility of us
Shed quench my thirsty soul
Then id become whole
Lest my heart crumbles into dust
I tried to resist her lure
But my strength could not endure
Who knew love could cause one so much stress
Buzzards overhead they soar
Waiting till I hit the floor
To descend upon me
and devour my flesh
Love me I beseech you
If my desperate words could reach you
Wherever you are is where I want to be
So love me never leave me
Then my darling love believe me
My desert heart will touch your hearts blue sea
In my desolate desert heart
I thirst for her love
My radiant dove
But alas my soul is parched
If she could only trust
the possibility of us
Shed quench my thirsty soul
Then id become whole
Lest my heart crumbles into dust
I tried to resist her lure
But my strength could not endure
Who knew love could cause one so much stress
Buzzards overhead they soar
Waiting till I hit the floor
To descend upon me
and devour my flesh
Love me I beseech you
If my desperate words could reach you
Wherever you are is where I want to be
So love me never leave me
Then my darling love believe me
My desert heart will touch your hearts blue sea
Published 20th Jan 2011
| Edited 18th Oct 2011
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20th Jan 2011 6:42pm
and I know the feeling all too well. Great rhyming in this piece too. In fact, I think I'll put it on my list.
21st Jan 2011 1:26am
21st Jan 2011 9:13am
this is just pretty all over. [:
"She appeared unto me as if a mirage
In my desolate desert heart
I thirst for her love
My radiant dove
But alas my soul is parched"
*swoon*
"She appeared unto me as if a mirage
In my desolate desert heart
I thirst for her love
My radiant dove
But alas my soul is parched"
*swoon*
1st Feb 2011 1:49pm
I was searching such lovely pieces this valentine season. Awesome and I like your rhyming too.
19th Jan 2012 9:12pm
"Wherever you are is where I want to be"
Deeply Romantic
Great flow
The picture is the icing to your words
Deeply Romantic
Great flow
The picture is the icing to your words
19th Jan 2012 9:23pm
thanks! i was searching online for a pic to add and when i saw this i was like YES! lol
19th Jan 2012 9:46pm
21st Jan 2012 5:36am
29th Nov 2012 1:59am
My goodness,Raven! I see the similarities in both pieces! Gave me chills......the loving kind! Desert Heart is beautifully crafted!
Reading some of your work has given me a little glimpse into YOU! An intriguing view to say the least! :) Xo
Reading some of your work has given me a little glimpse into YOU! An intriguing view to say the least! :) Xo
4th Dec 2012 4:05am
The parts I like best... "But alas", gives it a Shakespearian feel makes you think of old time romance. The theme of the desert is maintained throughout, stressing the dryness=lack of love, oh! The buzzards waitin for you to collapse, stresses the desparation, youre so close to the end buzzards can sense it. And damn, the last line..took what I saw in my mind a guy in a desert, the girl like a glass of water, but no, a desert meeting the sea; not little, but grand love.
4th Dec 2012 4:44am
