wouldst thee...   ...poof

Grant me my freedom
to wantonly graze your face
with rough kiss?
(I meet a lot of guys who dont shave often)

Permit my look into these eyes
looking into mine to wonder
who might you be?
(I would need to take off my glasses)

Allow me to feel the tides of your breasts
waxing and waning against my chest
embrace for but a fleeting year?
(Literally a year? how about five minutes once per day)
 
Fill my senses
to the state of senseless
drunk with you am I
(On weekends, OK, but I would need you to work hard during the week I would appreciate a steady income)
 
come rest into my arms
deeply and long then
Awake in Technicolor Poppy
Field day in the Sun
(That doesnt sound too bad but I hope you are not into mind altering substances, as I would like to be the one who makes you high)

Give me the benefit of Your Doubt
Ride me, your Stallion at full gallop
Along an Irish cliff
The Cold Sea roars us on
(But lets be realistic, due to your age, if I were really to
ride on your back, we are talking maybe fifty feet at a half mile per hour before I call the ambulance)

Then we exit the movie theater
Well i guess thats about it
(No, I need more     a lot more)