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Scarecrow
Hanging up waiting for you to go to bed
Nothing to worry about he's not alive or dead
Nothing more then an old wives tale
Hanging from his cross, straw by straw
He stalks his prey, just waiting for them to crawl
He haunts the little kids as they sleep
Stalking them as them through their window
Just waiting for them to be alone
So he can feast on their souls
Nobody gonna save you
once he puts his hands on you
Scarecrow
Nothing to worry about he's not alive or dead
Nothing more then an old wives tale
Hanging from his cross, straw by straw
He stalks his prey, just waiting for them to crawl
He haunts the little kids as they sleep
Stalking them as them through their window
Just waiting for them to be alone
So he can feast on their souls
Nobody gonna save you
once he puts his hands on you
Scarecrow
Published 22nd Oct 2013
| Edited 25th Oct 2013
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22nd Oct 2013 3:30pm
I feel like this could flow a bit better if your removed the "scarecrow scarecrow..." and added something aluding to the scarecrow near the end to pull the entire bit together, but its pretty good other than that.
22nd Oct 2013 5:56pm
I love this, but I think if you take out the "crawl, crawl, crawl" and the "scarecrow....scarecrow" "scarecrow....scarecrow....scarecrow"
It would make it so much better, just a thought. Anyway it was very good poem. Nicely done! :)
It would make it so much better, just a thought. Anyway it was very good poem. Nicely done! :)
22nd Oct 2013 5:57pm
